Friday, February 26, 2016

NO PARKING!


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NO PARKING

I told you not to park there!

Calm down. We'll find out where they're towing it too and pay the fine.

So much for hiding our time machine in plain sight. What if someone hits the wrong button?

Quit panicking. I created the remote starter for a reason. All we have to do is lock it down, and no matter what button they hit, nothing will happen. Just hand me the beach bag and I'll make sure.

You mean that cute blue and white number I bought yesterday.

Exactly!

Uh, sorry, but it's on the back seat of the car.

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Yolanda Renee © 2016


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16 comments:

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields said...

Dear Yolanda Renee,

So much for remote. Sounds like trouble will be afoot. Nicely done.

Shalom,

Rochelle

Dale said...

If it seems too easy, it probably is!!

Pat Hatt said...

Whoops, not very timely, huh? lol

Anonymous said...

Haha.. oh no! :)

Susan Flett Swiderski said...

Oops! This is a little different from your usual offerings, but it's terrific. I especially love the twist at the end. Hmmm, does that make you a "twisted writer"? :)

Tyrean Martinson said...

Love it! :)

Gah Learner said...

Made me laugh out loud. Fun story.

Sandra Crook said...

Nicely done! :)

Unknown said...

Ooppsie .. on leaving her bag. Fun story ...!!!
Isadora 😎

Sandra Cox said...

Love it! You have such an agile mind, Yolanda.

Julie Flanders said...

Haha, sadly I can see myself being the one who left the bag in the car. Fun story.

Denise Covey said...

Wonderful take on the No Parking sign, Yolanda! Fun little sci-fi snippet. (Get well soon!)

The Happy Whisk said...

You write these so well.

Yolanda Renée said...

Thanks, everyone. I've been laid low with the flu. My commenting, surfing, all activities are suffering. I appreciate your support and will get back to it as soon as I can breathe again. Pre-scheduled posts will appear, thank you for you generosity with my guests!

J Lenni Dorner said...

Ha ha ha. Good story.

Anonymous said...

Quite a quandary they are in!!! Hahahah!