Rochelle Wisoff-Fields asks:
Write a complete story in 100 words or less.
· Take your time
· Proofread
· Edit
· Include photo prompt and InLinkz code
· Post and Link your story URL
· Reciprocate. Read and comment. It's half the fun!
MAKE - EVERY - WORD – COUNT
NO PARKING
I told you not to park there!
Calm down. We'll find out where they're towing it too and pay the fine.
So much for hiding our time machine in plain sight. What if someone hits the wrong button?
Quit panicking. I created the remote starter for a reason. All we have to do is lock it down, and no matter what button they hit, nothing will happen. Just hand me the beach bag and I'll make sure.
You mean that cute blue and white number I bought yesterday.
Exactly!
Uh, sorry, but it's on the back seat of the car.
100 WORDS
Yolanda Renee © 2016
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16 comments:
Dear Yolanda Renee,
So much for remote. Sounds like trouble will be afoot. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
If it seems too easy, it probably is!!
Whoops, not very timely, huh? lol
Haha.. oh no! :)
Oops! This is a little different from your usual offerings, but it's terrific. I especially love the twist at the end. Hmmm, does that make you a "twisted writer"? :)
Love it! :)
Made me laugh out loud. Fun story.
Nicely done! :)
Ooppsie .. on leaving her bag. Fun story ...!!!
Isadora 😎
Love it! You have such an agile mind, Yolanda.
Haha, sadly I can see myself being the one who left the bag in the car. Fun story.
Wonderful take on the No Parking sign, Yolanda! Fun little sci-fi snippet. (Get well soon!)
You write these so well.
Thanks, everyone. I've been laid low with the flu. My commenting, surfing, all activities are suffering. I appreciate your support and will get back to it as soon as I can breathe again. Pre-scheduled posts will appear, thank you for you generosity with my guests!
Ha ha ha. Good story.
Quite a quandary they are in!!! Hahahah!
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