Friday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields @ Addicted to Purple. She has supplied us with a new photo prompt via The Reclining Gentleman To participate simply write a complete story in 100 words or less.
As Rochelle says, make every word count!
SPRING FLOWERS
I plant my favorite flowers in the community garden for all to enjoy. The first to bloom, the cheerful daffodil, with crocuses not far behind, then the tulips, a constant display of color and beauty.
My husband would be unmoved, and yet I can't help but think of him.
George and his girlfriend, Juliet, prepared for a quick escape to Rio, after cleaning out my bank account. Foiled them I did, well, my murderous hearted brother, and me. His handiwork, their downfall.
Now my brother celebrates freedom in Rio and I plant flowers on the grave of George and Juliet.
100 words
Yolanda Renée © 2016
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20 comments:
Like the twist! You're good at those.
haha they should have forgot the money and just ran
Love the twist in the end. You sure have packed a lot in the 100 words.
well crafted!
Good one! Alas, it seems that what some people are best suited for is to fertilize the garden...
Good little flash fiction of revenge. :)
I can't help but cheer. Am I a bad person or what?
I love this! ha. That must make me a little twisted!
That'll teach 'em to screw around with your acct.
Hi Yolanda,
I wish I could make every word count, but it just doesn't add up...
Such grave consequences and now I'm off to the Copa, Copacabana...
Have a lovely Valentine's Day, my adorable friend!
Gary :)
Oh another wicked story. Very grave consequences as Gary said. You taught them a lesson, what? Happy Valentine's Day my friend!
Ho, what a twist. She sure knows how to take her sweet revenge.
Ah, spring with fresh fertilizer . . . my snark humor came out on this one.
Thanks for sharing.
Satisfactory ending. :)
Remind me not to mess with you!
Thanks guys, sorry for the group response, but edits are back and time is limited. Your responses makes me keep writing these shortest of stories - THANK YOU!
So matter of fact it’s frightening.
oh my! what a deliciously wicked tale!
Sweet justice!
Dear Yolanda Renee,
Poetic Justice.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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