Tuesday, August 15, 2023

WEP - Chocolat

 

CHOCOLATE

         Sarah sighed heavily and drew an X across the small box showing March 31st in her calendar. Twenty-four days since the plane crash. Twenty-four days of cold and bitter winds. Even with clean water and the fish caught in the lake, her appetite was lacking, and Chet's insistence that he had to return to the plane left her fearful and sleepless. Add erratic hormones, fear, dwindling supplies, and a woman searching for but failing to find hope, and you have an emotional catastrophe waiting to happen.

Recognizing the signs of a self-indulgent pity party, she closed the calendar. She said a prayer of thanksgiving for the miracle of survival and closed with her favorite chant. "Oh God, My God, thy Name is my healing." Trying to be grateful but anxious and scared, she did her best to meditate but couldn't find the peace she desired.

The sketchbook beside her caught her attention, and she gazed at the drawing she'd completed upon waking. The picture was of a hungry wolf pack. Angry, howling, salivating mouths dripping with the blood of their latest kill. Sarah shut the book and shivered. The nightmare had awakened her, and she'd drawn it, but now it was an hour till dawn, and Chet would rise soon. He slept peacefully a few feet away from her. Her dreams had been about him and his alarming plans. She cuddled in her sleeping bag and waited for him to awaken.

An hour later, he did.

Sarah pretended to be asleep as Chet rolled up his sleeping bag and moved about the cave getting things ready for his trip. Realizing she was being foolish, she greeted him. "Want breakfast?"

"Good morning Sarah, no. I'll wait for lunchtime," he said as he dressed for his trip. "Rescue will be any day now, you'll see," he said, doubling his socks and putting his boots on. "I just want to clear the snow off the main cabin so they can see the plane from the sky. Then I'll light a signal fire using the plane's tires. Black smoke is sure to get someone's attention. I'll use the metal and other debris to create an arrow to show them we're well and waiting. I promise the rescuers will be here before you even have time to miss me," he said without a break.

She watched him closely. Was he trying to convince her or himself?

Sarah tried to smile but was unsuccessful. "Just please, please be careful. I'm worried."

"I know, and I will. I promise. I have to do this. The weather is clearing, and they're looking for the plane. We've been socked in down here but heard them above us, so the top of the mountain must be clear. I have to go to make finding us an easier task." Chet assured her.

"I understand," Sarah said as she stood. "I just wish I were going with you." She wrapped her woolen scarf around his neck.

"Thanks." Chet buried his nose in it and breathed deeply. "It has your perfume on it. It'll be my inspiration," Chet said with a smile. "And I have a special surprise for you." He pulled a package from his pack. "I've been saving it for just this occasion." He handed a small parcel to her.

"Really," she said as she tore the brown paper bag wrapping. Inside was a dark chocolate Hershey bar. Sarah smiled in delight. "Chocolate! My word, how wonderful. Thank you," she said as she hugged him and kissed his cheek.

"I held it back just for that reaction," Chet said. His smile was just as bright as Sarah's. "Fish is getting monotonous, but this should add a bit of delight to your day."

"Oh, it will. Thank you. I'll save some for your return meal. We'll celebrate together."

Chet laughed. "Enjoy all of it. Besides, I'll have the rescuers with me. There won't be time for a meal. Enjoy it while you wait. Once off this blasted mountain, we'll celebrate with champagne and chocolate eclairs. How's that sound?"

"Wonderful," she said and hugged him again. Except she felt like crying instead of laughing. But for him, she held her tears in check. Despite all his assurances, she was beyond worried.

Unsure she was being ridiculous or an overly emotional pregnant lady, she kept her fear to herself. He'd heard the wolf's cry, just as she had, but since he had the shotgun, his mind was made up. Rescue depended on letting the rescuers know where they were, he said repeatedly, and she knew he was right. But fear is the thief of hope, and she had a bad case. Still, she shook it off. She didn't want him to leave with worry for her on his mind.

Chet grabbed his backpack and snowshoes. He surveyed the cavern. "I hate to take the tent," he said, hesitating as if rethinking his decision. The tent had been her private room. A space for her to be alone and feel safe.

"Don't. I'm fine in here without it. You'll need it more than I will. Did you take enough dried fish?" She asked, even though she'd packed it the night before.

Chet smiled. "I did. You just be careful outside, okay?"

Sarah nodded. "You too."

All words spoken. Chet turned to the cave entrance.

Sarah grabbed her crutch, which Chet had carved for her on their first night in the cave. She followed him to the mouth of the cavern and watched as he walked to the rope hanging from the rocks above. He hesitated, turned for one last look at the frozen waterfall, then he waved, and she returned the gesture. Chet deftly climbed the cliff to the path that led to the plane. In a flash, he was gone, and she was alone.

Shivering uncontrollably, she looked at the bar of dark chocolate in her hand and sobbed like a child.

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988 words

Yolanda Renée © 2023


Tagline: Solace is found in the simplest gesture.

This is another excerpt from the 7th book of my Alaskan Series, Murder on Mount Fairweather, coming out December 2023. 

I must credit the WEP prompts for inspiring my writing this year. I've failed most of my writing goals for 2023, but because of the WEP, I keep plugging away.

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36 comments:

Elizabeth Seckman said...

Wow. She should've trusted her gut!

J Lenni Dorner said...

I agree that WEP is keeping me writing even when life is being especially challenging.
Not just any Hershey bar but a Special Dark. Those are awesome.
Love the excerpt. Hope the rescue comes.

"We are all children of chance, and none can say why some fields will blossom while others lay brown beneath the August sun." – Kent Nerburn quote

J Lenni Dorner (he/him 👨🏽 or 🧑🏽 they/them) ~ Speculative Fiction &Reference Author, OperationAwesome6 Debut Author Interviewer, and Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge

Denise Covey said...

Hey Renee. Like JLenni, WEP is keeping you writing. That's awesome. Loved this excerpt. Really fitted the chocolat prompt!

Elephant's Child said...

I love this. And this greedy reader is very, very glad that WEP is keeping your writing.

Natalie Aguirre said...

Great excerpt that went really well with the theme. I liked how you inserted little details, like that she is pregnant, throughout the piece.

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Hi Renee - so glad you're inspired by the prompts - they push me ... but not this one - it'll go up shortly. I do hope they're rescued ... but that rope connection sounds ominous - yet there's hope ... she's pregnant with life ahead. Chocolate is invaluable ... and yes 'tagline: solace is found in the simplest gesture' ... loved it - now I'm feeling cold! Also so very glad I'm not in a cave in Alaska waiting to be rescued. Congratulations on the entry - cheers Hilary

Sonia Dogra said...

Wow! You had me hooked. I cannot stop thinking 'what next'? How many more adventures before he gets the rescue team. I ardently hope the wine and chocolate eclairs happen soon.

Damyanti Biswas said...

This was such an interesting read! I was hooked from the very beginning, and I love how creatively you used the prompt.

Jemi Fraser said...

I'm so worried about these two!!! You know my heart wants them to be okay!

Olga Godim said...

I hope the rescuers find them. The tension is so high in your story, I almost feel the bad end coming, but I hope nonetheless.

dolorah said...

Great excerpt. You can tell this couple has had a good relationship. You've naturally dropped in a lot of details the progress the story and character building. Well done.

N. R. Williams said...

Those two are survivors even if they must wait until spring. Well written.
Nancy

Anonymous said...

Carole Stolz… Oh no! I want more! What happens? Does she pacify the wolves with the chocolate? Do they make it? Great tale.

Maurice Mitchell said...

I can't remember ever wanting a chocolate bar so much in my life but you really make the gift impactful. Great job with such an touching story, and I'm wish you a boss day Yolanda!
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Yolanda Renée said...

Maurice, it is so wonderful to see you again. Thank you for stopping by. A boss day, gosh, I haven't had one of those in forever, but now I'll plan one! LOL :) Sending love!

Yolanda Renée said...

Gosh, I wish it were possible to pacify wolves with chocolate. Good suggestion, though. Thanks!

Yolanda Renée said...

Love your optimism. Thanks, Nancy!

Yolanda Renée said...

Hey Donna, so happy to see you posting again. Thanks!

Yolanda Renée said...

Thanks Olga, hope is a good thing, but it always gets worse before it gets better.

Yolanda Renée said...

LOL, Jemi, me too!

Yolanda Renée said...

Thank you, Damyanti.

Yolanda Renée said...

Hi Sonia, rescue always come at the last possible moment.

Yolanda Renée said...

This year they've been my writing salvation. In this heat, writing about the cold feels right! :)

Yolanda Renée said...

Tried to get it all in. Thanks, Natalie.

Yolanda Renée said...

Thanks Sue, it's always great to hear from you!

Yolanda Renée said...

Thanks Denise, it really has. I loved being able to include this in book 7.

Yolanda Renée said...

Beautiful quote. Nice to see a fellow author using the WEP as inspiration.

Yolanda Renée said...

Hi Elizabeth, she does, but he doesn't. :( Thanks for stopping by!

Kalpana said...

I can't wait to read more Renee! It's a wonderful piece of writing, with the gentle inclusion of all the details.

Beth Camp said...

"Fear is the thief of hope." How powerful those words are in this situation as the days pass and this couple is lost in the wilderness. She is pregnant, wounded, and without a gun to protect herself. He is determined to take action that will make it possible for the seekers to find them. Both have heard the wolves. Somehow his gift of chocolate brings hope. This is a page-turner! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Jamie said...

Pregnant while lost and freezing after a plane crash? That's a lot going on for her! Ohhh, a Hershey's Special Dark. ❤ That was always my mom's favorite. Pennsylvania represent! 😉

I enjoyed your story very much.

Nilanjana Bose said...

I do so love dark chocolate! So thoughtful of Chet to save that bar as a parting gift. I hope the rescue team will find them soon. Your writing is fab - hooked from the get go and the tension is taut, didn't draw breath till the end..

Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost said...

This would certainly be an awful situation. I hope the characters are rescued!

Shilpa Gupte said...

What happens next? I am so worried now! I hope the rescue team reaches them soon.

Anonymous said...

thecontemplativecat here. What happens next!?! Great story, well written. You have me in the cabin with her. Dark Chocolate makes every disaster a little bit brighter.

Bernadette said...

Hooked to the very end. But I need to know, does he come back?