I’ve seen all the ‘fog’ movies and watched gleefully as the
victims paid for their audacity. Slashers, horrendous creatures, and hideous
bugs have all hidden their evil in the murkiness of a foggy night. But that’s
movie-making, the scarier, the better. In reality, a walk into the thick mist
is super energizing.
It allows me to disappear, lurk, stalk, and yes, kill with
delicious precision. I bet you thought I was going to talk about how I enjoy
being swallowed by nature. How I become part of it and relish the experience.
Well, that’s all true, but for me, it’s all about the victim.
After all, I know their fear. It’s the best part. My victim’s
terror is what feeds me. I can smell it on them as they cautiously move past me,
unaware and yet very aware that I’m there. As the smell of panic becomes more
potent, I wonder why they come out? Is it a dare? Are they looking for a
confrontation? It can’t be to prove their bravery. They exhibit none! Because
no one accidentally wanders into the woods in the dark of night. Well,
no one but me.
My favorite victim is the lone young woman. Although I do
adore the young couples looking for a place to be alone. But tonight, I’ve hit
the jackpot. A young woman is walking nonchalantly down the path. She’s not
cautious or fearful, which takes a bit of the fun out the night. The bitch is
on her phone and barely paying attention to the direction she’s taken. Still,
she’s the perfect victim. Lost, stupid, and unaware. I can’t just let her pass.
She’s mine. All mine!
I move ahead of her and get ready to pounce—my best blade at
hand.
I jump in front of her, grab her with both arms, and say,
“Excuse me. I didn’t see you there. The fog tonight is so thick.” Then I give
her my best laugh and wait for her to realize her fate.
She rolls her eyes. “I know,” she says. It was specifically
prepared for the night. My people know the perfect thickness for a Halloween
cover. It’s the best way to catch predators. Like you.”
Her smile shows perfect white teeth, a lot of jagged, and terrifyingly
sharp teeth. I try to shake off my shock at her response. “What?” I mumble, caught
totally off guard by her words and that mouth—those teeth.
But she only smiles. “What number am I? The tenth, isn’t it?”
“You…you know me?’
“We keep track. Thought the police would take you off the
street, but the cops haven’t, so we have to.”
“You? Who are you?” My knife slips from my overly moist hand.
“Your worst enemy, my dear.” Her laugh stuns, and her teeth continue
to grow. Before my eyes, her body morphs into the most hideous creature I’ve
ever seen.
This monster was a mixture of dark colors, red, black, purple,
and flowing with green blood coursing through transparent veins. She had arms
everywhere, long, powerful legs and now stood at least ten feet tall—her
mouth. Oh god, that mouth and those sharp, hideous teeth that dripped with putrid
saliva caused my stomach to lurch in revolt. She wrapped her arms around me, and,
in a flash, we were in the middle of the forest.
Within minutes I was stripped of all clothes. My hands were tied
behind my back with twine, and with a grubby potato stuffed into my mouth, her even
uglier friends gingerly lowered me into a large pot of cold water. She dropped
in cups full of salt, pepper, cayenne, and several bay leaves.
“Dinner will be ready in about two hours,” she announced as
she lighted a fire under the pot I was in. “We want this one to simmer awhile.
I like my soup thick,” she told the crowd around her as two other monsters
added several large pots of navy beans.
The crowd shouted their appreciation. I watched, dumbfounded,
as the monsters settled down on the grass to continue their games and
conversations. I noticed that the fog had separated. It circled the area and
provided a dome of protection. What I once relished as protection had betrayed
me. A higher evil had assumed power.
Fear the fog! Don’t venture down an unknown or even known
path on a profoundly thick night, and especially on Halloween.
Listen to what I tell you. I know, I should have heeded my
own words. Remember when I said that no one accidentally wanders into the fog
on a dark and lonely night, especially on Halloween! What I thought was a beautiful,
young girl proves my word.
Yes, I know it’s all too funny. Especially as these are the words
of a serial killer. But if folks like me don’t get you—maybe these hungry creatures
will!
835 Words
Yolanda Renée (C) 2020
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5 comments:
I do love that karma has finally come out to play - and that her mouth and those sharp, hideous teeth that dripped with putrid saliva are more than sufficient weaponry ( when teemed with the element of surprise of course).
What a great, creepy story. Perfect for this time of year.
Geez, girl. Your sure have embraced the spirit of Halloween haven't you? Your story is deliciously creepy, but it was great to see the predator be turned into the prey. (Not exactly the kind of dinner invitation he would've chosen, eh?) Great job!
Hi Yolanda - ghastly thought ... but what an excellent turn of events ... thankfully we don't seem to have much fog down here ... occasional se fog ... but wonderful turn of events for our unfortunate one. Love the idea of the teeth growing ... thankfully no hotpot tonight for me! Take care - Hilary
At first, I thought you were talking about yourself and I was wondering just how brave you were! Then the creep factor went on overdrive and I figured it out. LOL
I knew fog was bad. Even the predator isn't safe in the fog.
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