Showing posts with label Yolanda Renee Hlloween. Show all posts
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Friday, October 10, 2025

SACRIFICE - A Halloween Treat

 

Photo by Brandon Griggs on Unsplash


SACRIFICE

“There it is.” Jimmy pointed toward the stone building—a massive, weathered mausoleum with barred windows and a heavy wooden door crowned by a cross. Angels crouched at the steps, but it was the gargoyles glaring down from the roof that made me shiver.

We stopped several yards away.

“Let’s set up here.” Jimmy adjusted his tripod and camera. He took the wand from me and handed me a humming device, its lights blinking like a pulse.

“Turn in a slow circle,” he said. “Stop when you’re facing the mausoleum. This will pick up any activity.”

“This is ghost hunting?” I tried to laugh, but the sound caught in my throat.

“Nothing scary. Almost boring.” He flashed me his killer smile.

I obeyed. The device thrummed louder, and the vibration climbed up my arm. Then I saw them—shapes—dozens of them. Pale faces emerged from the dark, circling, watching us, laughing until they realized I could see them.

“Jimmy,” I whispered, “they’re coming toward us.”

“Who?”

“Them.” My finger trembled as I pointed. He followed my gaze but saw nothing.

“You can see ghosts?” he asked, snapping photos frantically, his light flashing across empty air.

“They’re closing in—except the mausoleum. It’s clear.”

Jimmy grabbed his equipment and bolted for the crypt. “Come on!”

He shoved the door open easily—too easily. It swung wide without a groan, as though it had been used recently. We stumbled inside. I was crying and terrified, but he wrapped me in his arms, kissed me, and calmed me.

“I won’t let anything happen to you,” he murmured.

The room smelled faintly of roses, wax, and dust overlaying something older—death. Yet it was spotless, gleaming marble, polished floors, fresh roses in vases. An angel statue loomed, and in the center, a stone sarcophagus with a robed effigy carved atop it. I saw no ghosts and felt a fleeting relief.

Until a voice came from the shadows.

“I wouldn’t recommend leaving.”

I nearly screamed. Jimmy spun, putting himself between me and the sound.

A man stepped into view. Red eyes, crooked grin, his face twisted into something that reminded me of a jack-o’-lantern. “I’m the caretaker. Dug three graves today. I spend Halloween nights here, keeping pranksters away. But you? You saw them.”

I nodded.

“They don’t like being seen,” he said, lighting a cigarette. Smoke curled around his grin. “The last ones who did? Missing.”

Jimmy drew me deeper into the room. The caretaker handed us a blanket. “Stay till daylight. They won’t enter here. This is holy ground.”

I wanted to run, but Jimmy pressed close, soothing me, offering wine. I pretended to sip, dumping mine in a vase when he wasn’t looking. Soon, exhaustion dragged me under.

When I woke, hushed voices drifted through the dark: Jimmy and the caretaker.

“She’s out,” Jimmy said. “Should be till midnight.”

“You’re sure she’s a virgin?” the caretaker asked.

“Positive. It was hard to keep my distance. She’s special.”

Ice filled my veins.

“Good,” the caretaker said. “We’ll prepare the room. Then we’ll dress her for the sacrifice.”

Sacrifice.

I didn’t wait. I forced the heavy door—lighter than air this time—and ran.

© Yolanda Renée 2025

586 Words


Initially published on October 8, 2012, as Graveyards and Mausoleums, rewritten for this year’s Halloween Celebration.


HAPPY HALLOWEEN!


Photo by Allison Saeng on Unsplash


Thursday, September 1, 2022

There's a "Bad Moon Rising"

 I know it's only September, but I'm already excited for the unholy month of haunting, October. So here it is. My ode to the ghosts, goblins, vampires, and witches. Starting today, I'm posting weekly. Each week a new song, because everyone needs a playlist for that Halloween party, and why not a flash to go along with it? After all, it's all about the ghost story, isn't it?

The first song chosen is:

"Bad Moon Rising" by Creedence Clearwater Revival

https://youtu.be/5BmEGm-mraE

Photo by Vino Li on Unsplash

THERE'S A "BAD MOON RISING"

September's here, but something disconcerting is occurring in Hell. There's a disturbance among the denizens below.

Even Satan is dancing to a tune we all know.

Celebrating in Hell, the ghosts and goblins are preparing to appear. Unfortunately, the bad news is that it won't just be on Halloween this year.

When the sun goes down. The world will awaken to an unholy sound. All the demons, gargoyles, and ghosts will arise and take flight. Guard your soul, don't mess around!

Lock your doors tight, for evil has arisen, and no one is safe from diablo's intrusion.

Happy early Halloween!

100 words

Yolanda Renée © 2022

*****

This was just to prepare you for the fun

that is coming in October!

The WEP Challenge 

THRILLER

(follow the link to the lyrics)


A little more inspiration taken directly from the list of Challenges for 2022

This is the Fear fest Challenge in which we ramp up the spook factor over here, welcoming your creepiest compositions, your most haunting and haunted tales running the gamut of paranormal, speculative, crime, and horror genres. However, as always, there are no rigid rules. Feel free to write to any genre if those mentioned are not your thing. 

The prompt is based on Thriller, released in the early '80s,  an unofficial anthem for Halloween and horror. Both singer and song are music industry icons. Thriller has sold 70 million+ copies worldwide and Michael Jackson, known as the King of Pop, is one of the controversial and culturally significant figures of the 20th century. They credited him with some landmark music as well as reinventing complex dance moves like the moonwalk to make it his own signature. Just like the Beatles, MJ was, during his lifetime and remains, more than a decade after his death, one of the bestselling artists of all time. He has left a massive and unique thumbprint on the music/entertainment scene of the late twentieth century. 

The prompt has endless possibilities. Take the lyrics to this song - they can inspire myriad flashes - the forty thousand years of funk, the beast about to strike, the thing with forty eyes - the imagery is vivid and specific, and boy! Can they be used to craft a creepy tale or what? Or you could use the video's own storyline to write to. Use that iconic dance with the undead MC morphing into a zombie, to spin a horror flash. 

Or maybe not...because hang on...not everyone needs to be a horror/Halloween junkie. Use the demons as a metaphor. Let the dance with the zombies become an inner wrestling bout with some tragic character flaw(s) in your MC. Or weave a girl-boy-movie-night narrative. Or one of a rescue mission where the hero snatches the damsel in distress from the jaws of monsters real or imaginary.  Or...just write to the title 'Thriller' - no end to the tales you could tell. You see? - a million ways to go, a million things to be! 

Here is the link to the thriller lyrics if you need more inspiration: THRILLER

Remember it's all about fun!

See you there? 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7fVfNCvwsA



I hope you enjoy my drabbles!

DRABBLE

A drabble is a short work of fiction of precisely 100 words. The purpose of the drabble is brevity, testing the author's ability to express interesting and meaningful ideas in a confined space.

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