'The test of
our progress is not whether we add more to the abundance of those who have
much; it is whether we provide enough for those who have too little.'—
Franklin
D. Roosevelt
'The test of
our progress is not whether we add more to the abundance of those who have
much; it is whether we provide enough for those who have too little.'—
Franklin
D. Roosevelt
‘Yesterday we obeyed kings and bent
our necks before emperors. But today we kneel only to truth, follow only
beauty, and obey only love.’
Khalil Gibran
‘Nothing in all the world is more
dangerous than sincere ignorance and conscientious stupidity.’ –
Martin Luther King, Jr.
‘Write it on your heart that
every day is the best day in the year.’ –
Ralph Waldo Emerson
I combine a developmental edit with a content edit to give you a complete written evaluation of your short story, novella, or novel.
Are you having trouble with your plot or creating believable characters? Have a great beginning and an incredible end but keep getting stuck in the middle? Need more conflict but don't know where to add it. I'm here to help.
I will provide an in-depth review of your writing. It'll be focused on improving the content and structure of your short story, novella, novel, or nonfiction book. My primary goal is to help a book have a clear focus. And ensure that the elements, such as tone and style, plot lines, character development, and red herrings, all make sense.
I will compose an editorial letter that takes in the entire perspective of the writing and recommends keeping the piece focused. I will address the following issues:
· Character development
· Dialogue
· Tone or style
· Sentence phrasing
· Pacing concerns
· Setting issues
· Plot holes
A Line Edit is available using 'Track Changes' for another fee, but ALL FEES NEGOTIABLE!
This is not a complete copyedit or proofread regarding grammar.
But any issues found will be pointed out.
My stories are always stronger with her input. She helps me ensure I’ve “closed the loops” on all the plot points. Her edit notes are thorough, on point, and encouraging.
Thanks for everything, Renée!
I love working with Renée!
Renée always gets the heart of the story. Her edits enhance
my work and add that final polish. Her sense of humour shows up in her notes
and makes it fun to do the editing. Thanks so much, Renée!
Renée showed a fantastic
understanding of my book and the characters. Her suggestions were on point and
helped polish the story while staying true to my vision.
Renée is professional, thorough,
and thoughtful.
Thanks for making my work shine,
Renée!
Jemi Fraser wrote this regarding the Developmental Edit of her novel No Going Back - now available:
Thanks for the polish, Renée!
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I’VE ALWAYS LOVED TREES
So beautiful
as they sway in the breeze
like skeleton
hands
using the
language of the deaf
reminds me of
Jeff
the man hung
until his death
it wasn’t
quick
but mr slick
got what he
deserved
outmaneuvered
by women
his skin, now
thin like linen
those he
denigrated in life
he couldn’t
fight in death
on Halloween
night
at 12:01 AM
the souls he
stole
made quick
work of that fool.
Muhahahaha!
YRS © 2024
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
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