tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post8440853490650121972..comments2024-02-09T19:43:19.860-05:00Comments on DEFENDING THE PEN: HARLOTYolanda Renéehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-56845982265196448652015-07-22T02:35:21.968-04:002015-07-22T02:35:21.968-04:00Good story but I feel for the daughter. Not nice b...Good story but I feel for the daughter. Not nice being blamed for the breakup of the marriage. They all need help. Fancy calling your daughter a harlot.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652282229264394887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-16601699722275503672015-07-22T02:35:09.409-04:002015-07-22T02:35:09.409-04:00Good story but I feel for the daughter. Not nice b...Good story but I feel for the daughter. Not nice being blamed for the breakup of the marriage. They all need help. Fancy calling your daughter a harlot.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652282229264394887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-17904102448628776722015-07-21T20:07:32.702-04:002015-07-21T20:07:32.702-04:00Good but sad story of a troubled woman. She needs ...Good but sad story of a troubled woman. She needs professional help and quickly. She's really confused. It's a shame this sometimes happens. Well done, Yolanda. ------ SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-74321420270073329492015-07-21T04:36:13.530-04:002015-07-21T04:36:13.530-04:00So many ways to interpret this: Dad's a paedop...So many ways to interpret this: Dad's a paedophile, Mum's a jealous bitch, Daughter is manipulative, &c. Good piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-82971211660488898982015-07-20T12:52:54.132-04:002015-07-20T12:52:54.132-04:00Wonder who is going to change the diapers?Wonder who is going to change the diapers?Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-63459487838656632422015-07-20T08:18:41.450-04:002015-07-20T08:18:41.450-04:00Now that's a twist. Totally unexpected, nicely...Now that's a twist. Totally unexpected, nicely done.Subrotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09201941160294779130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-15053818169587737732015-07-19T20:38:31.688-04:002015-07-19T20:38:31.688-04:00Thanks everyone, for stopping by and commenting. I...Thanks everyone, for stopping by and commenting. I couldn't post individual responses this time due to time, and because I wanted to post on every participants page = over 90 of those and that's a big, big job. But I appreciate you stopping and leaving a few words. This was meant to show that a mother - daughter relationship can go sour just moments after birth. A jealous wife feels slighted when she sees the love the father holds for his first child. Again, thank you for taking the time to read and comment - it means the world!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-57767294282483341832015-07-19T13:33:36.593-04:002015-07-19T13:33:36.593-04:00Oh dear. Something is very off in that family. I...Oh dear. Something is very off in that family. I can think of at least two different ways it could be.Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-31644594185176138952015-07-19T01:06:51.358-04:002015-07-19T01:06:51.358-04:00So sad she turned out to his daughter. Maybe thing...So sad she turned out to his daughter. Maybe things will turn around for the family later. Very intriguing story, Yolanda. Nice one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-34407635559651793862015-07-18T20:45:05.321-04:002015-07-18T20:45:05.321-04:00That's very sad, to lose all that one loves in...That's very sad, to lose all that one loves in one shot. - Just JoyfulnessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-779042377005141012015-07-18T15:19:31.439-04:002015-07-18T15:19:31.439-04:00Fascinating piece, subject to multiple interpretat...Fascinating piece, subject to multiple interpretations. Great job!Perry Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13439590071776264237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-56219964731120591112015-07-18T08:31:54.079-04:002015-07-18T08:31:54.079-04:00Horrid woman. Jealous of her own daughter. Sadly...Horrid woman. Jealous of her own daughter. Sadly this does happe for realz!Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-13880331048247437062015-07-18T05:20:15.870-04:002015-07-18T05:20:15.870-04:00No maternal bonding then. Love the twist at the e...No maternal bonding then. Love the twist at the end.<br />Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-6364313910868666652015-07-18T04:22:32.814-04:002015-07-18T04:22:32.814-04:00Holy crap - you knocked it out of the park! Great ...Holy crap - you knocked it out of the park! Great twist at the end. So clever! I'm very happy to have read this. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-5494151245804313312015-07-18T03:19:40.718-04:002015-07-18T03:19:40.718-04:00Wow, this family is creeping me out a bit! Great r...Wow, this family is creeping me out a bit! Great reveal at the end that the "other woman" is their daughter.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-91641938798243904912015-07-17T18:20:38.519-04:002015-07-17T18:20:38.519-04:00Oh man! Wow! What a crappy mother!Oh man! Wow! What a crappy mother!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-62984433966506192602015-07-17T18:13:29.229-04:002015-07-17T18:13:29.229-04:00So sad. I couldn't make a judgement. :-)So sad. I couldn't make a judgement. :-)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-27899498871210930852015-07-17T14:50:55.637-04:002015-07-17T14:50:55.637-04:00I agree, selfish mother.I agree, selfish mother.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14087140585742801854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-54120597844759565752015-07-17T13:48:55.746-04:002015-07-17T13:48:55.746-04:00That's one selfish mother, yes.That's one selfish mother, yes. Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-4544180158431826752015-07-17T13:12:38.787-04:002015-07-17T13:12:38.787-04:00How sad. Great story!How sad. Great story!Priceless Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08527831752045269161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-80206796446801229432015-07-17T12:47:25.768-04:002015-07-17T12:47:25.768-04:00What a selfish mother, I'm sorry for the daugh...What a selfish mother, I'm sorry for the daughter. Good story.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-38969339019305760782015-07-17T11:46:05.336-04:002015-07-17T11:46:05.336-04:00Sure not The Brady BunchSure not The Brady BunchPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-46912180751611253662015-07-17T04:17:44.152-04:002015-07-17T04:17:44.152-04:00Dear Yolanda,
A dysfunctional family for sure.
...Dear Yolanda, <br /><br />A dysfunctional family for sure. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-20581807860333810202015-07-17T02:49:43.663-04:002015-07-17T02:49:43.663-04:00Not a happy family then. :( Not a happy family then. :( Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.com