tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post3822740673465047123..comments2024-02-09T19:43:19.860-05:00Comments on DEFENDING THE PEN: HAUNTEDYolanda Renéehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-60025002233258203222015-08-14T00:09:26.716-04:002015-08-14T00:09:26.716-04:00Those ruins certainly set the scene. Your tale of...Those ruins certainly set the scene. Your tale of killer beasts and decimation is gripping, Yolanda. Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-34675809957976947952015-08-11T15:53:19.625-04:002015-08-11T15:53:19.625-04:00Very dark. I hope she gets her revenge,
I like you...Very dark. I hope she gets her revenge,<br />I like your description of the killers as "beasts" - they were in a way, with their "fire sticks" and thirst for invasion and murder.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-90615053951682712642015-08-11T12:05:34.238-04:002015-08-11T12:05:34.238-04:00This is a chilling tale! I wonder how he got his ...This is a chilling tale! I wonder how he got his revenge.... Thanks for writing again for the MFtS challenge and be well... ^..^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04036472765583037689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-49716883672864356072015-08-11T08:22:50.463-04:002015-08-11T08:22:50.463-04:00Wonderfully written and chilling.Wonderfully written and chilling.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-34072842586475540962015-08-11T06:24:20.098-04:002015-08-11T06:24:20.098-04:00Revenge served ...Revenge served ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-81200207941095199042015-08-10T21:42:09.051-04:002015-08-10T21:42:09.051-04:00twisty scary goodness! nice job!twisty scary goodness! nice job!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-60433223696378591342015-08-10T21:35:11.660-04:002015-08-10T21:35:11.660-04:00Thanks Robyn, appreciate the read and especially t...Thanks Robyn, appreciate the read and especially the comment. I have a tendency to go where the prompt takes me.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-47311277868918575202015-08-10T21:34:11.515-04:002015-08-10T21:34:11.515-04:00Thanks Graham, appreciate you stopping by.Thanks Graham, appreciate you stopping by.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-82509266707184399672015-08-10T21:32:30.512-04:002015-08-10T21:32:30.512-04:00Me too Chrys, but it doesn't end, does it? Wil...Me too Chrys, but it doesn't end, does it? Will it ever?Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-82917213193094521062015-08-10T21:30:47.438-04:002015-08-10T21:30:47.438-04:00Thanks Joy!Thanks Joy!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-78691625832477422832015-08-10T21:30:05.878-04:002015-08-10T21:30:05.878-04:00Me too, a horrible scene to witness.Me too, a horrible scene to witness.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-57353678904700763022015-08-10T21:29:18.976-04:002015-08-10T21:29:18.976-04:00Thanks Sally, in some way, yes.Thanks Sally, in some way, yes.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-19114075373963182742015-08-10T21:28:50.972-04:002015-08-10T21:28:50.972-04:00She's one determined lady, they better!She's one determined lady, they better!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-89143801259464446242015-08-10T21:28:23.314-04:002015-08-10T21:28:23.314-04:00Hi Alex, thanks, I tried to view the scene from he...Hi Alex, thanks, I tried to view the scene from her perspective.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-68994049300596724832015-08-10T20:44:50.690-04:002015-08-10T20:44:50.690-04:00Yolanda, that was fantastic! I loved reading it. T...Yolanda, that was fantastic! I loved reading it. That last sentence was awesome. Your use of beasts was so good. You rocked it. Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-64641073065408504352015-08-10T20:44:33.608-04:002015-08-10T20:44:33.608-04:00Yolanda, that was fantastic! I loved reading it. T...Yolanda, that was fantastic! I loved reading it. That last sentence was awesome. Your use of beasts was so good. You rocked it. Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-15743431059153810282015-08-10T17:28:40.176-04:002015-08-10T17:28:40.176-04:00Great slant on this story. A very interesting read...Great slant on this story. A very interesting read. Thank You!Graham Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01248393091480494859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-66688933935570160832015-08-10T16:58:28.170-04:002015-08-10T16:58:28.170-04:00It always makes me sad when I think about all the ...It always makes me sad when I think about all the Native Americans who were killed. This was a great (but sad) story about vengeance. Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-91334395819207531082015-08-10T16:10:20.515-04:002015-08-10T16:10:20.515-04:00Excellent story Yolanda! I loved it.Excellent story Yolanda! I loved it.Priceless Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08527831752045269161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-41842293959879796082015-08-10T14:54:32.977-04:002015-08-10T14:54:32.977-04:00Feel sorry for the character watching the destruct...Feel sorry for the character watching the destruction of her home.cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-49098688621665805332015-08-10T14:54:24.048-04:002015-08-10T14:54:24.048-04:00Feel sorry for the character watching the destruct...Feel sorry for the character watching the destruction of her home.cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-83167634492338151462015-08-10T11:33:40.245-04:002015-08-10T11:33:40.245-04:00I'm sure vengeance will be exacted - great sto...I'm sure vengeance will be exacted - great storySallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-74323630070881367262015-08-10T11:32:31.807-04:002015-08-10T11:32:31.807-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-87597837254287861952015-08-10T11:02:44.211-04:002015-08-10T11:02:44.211-04:00The invaders better watch their backThe invaders better watch their backPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-16127274171040950202015-08-10T11:01:44.829-04:002015-08-10T11:01:44.829-04:00Very creative! I wouldn't have come up with be...Very creative! I wouldn't have come up with beasts attacking.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com