tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post7367355446105160972..comments2024-02-09T19:43:19.860-05:00Comments on DEFENDING THE PEN: CONSEQUENCESYolanda Renéehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-18198226507864394752015-09-03T18:00:11.388-04:002015-09-03T18:00:11.388-04:00Plot twist, dun dun DUNNN. Cool story :)Plot twist, dun dun DUNNN. Cool story :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07165495372283788914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-4563212881457930072015-09-02T13:15:04.653-04:002015-09-02T13:15:04.653-04:00Good ending.Good ending.The Happy Whiskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438469476168485775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-54694838499887273052015-09-01T21:51:53.486-04:002015-09-01T21:51:53.486-04:00Thanks Denise, still happens though! :)Thanks Denise, still happens though! :)Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-67339345612318084412015-09-01T21:51:11.302-04:002015-09-01T21:51:11.302-04:00Hi Alistair, HUGE!Hi Alistair, HUGE!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-56869368535726689402015-09-01T21:50:54.516-04:002015-09-01T21:50:54.516-04:00Hi yarnspinner, so true, a time you can ruin your ...Hi yarnspinner, so true, a time you can ruin your entire life with one bad move!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-38281185974571457612015-09-01T21:26:31.263-04:002015-09-01T21:26:31.263-04:00Hi tnkerr, you're right, and yes we all do!Hi tnkerr, you're right, and yes we all do!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-18411469828016603902015-09-01T20:41:30.414-04:002015-09-01T20:41:30.414-04:00Superb Yolanda. 'Stop blaming me for the world...Superb Yolanda. 'Stop blaming me for the world' ills.' Love it. Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-67496363602396570852015-09-01T13:32:26.812-04:002015-09-01T13:32:26.812-04:00Well, teenagers will make mistakes! That was a pre...Well, teenagers will make mistakes! That was a pretty big one, though.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-37552917983350888342015-09-01T09:27:50.107-04:002015-09-01T09:27:50.107-04:00The young are easy prey. Well executed.The young are easy prey. Well executed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-45810088707674585162015-08-31T22:41:10.173-04:002015-08-31T22:41:10.173-04:00I have found that if you are pointing your finger ...I have found that if you are pointing your finger at somebody then nobody looks at you. I think most of us probably sleep with the devil at least once.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-64966976660248343792015-08-31T22:08:22.481-04:002015-08-31T22:08:22.481-04:00Hi Robyn, Thanks, oh yes I do. I swear I learn som...Hi Robyn, Thanks, oh yes I do. I swear I learn something new everyday. Be open to it and it happens. Recognize it and you'll use it. That's what it's all about, this fabulous writing community!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-85173521654297964712015-08-31T22:06:48.496-04:002015-08-31T22:06:48.496-04:00Hi Jo, I know creepy, but it went with the story, ...Hi Jo, I know creepy, but it went with the story, and now a days, kids are more fearless! Thanks!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-85286489484541780912015-08-31T22:05:56.981-04:002015-08-31T22:05:56.981-04:00Just dive in and write. Practice, practice, practi...Just dive in and write. Practice, practice, practice - that's what I've been doing. Weekly challenges make it possible and fun. Join us! Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-30631658369338679762015-08-31T21:42:25.300-04:002015-08-31T21:42:25.300-04:00That story was awesome! I loved it. I have trouble...That story was awesome! I loved it. I have trouble with flash fiction-telling a story in a short amount of words, so you have alot to teach me about technique.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05161178778732701008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-37891644951723188262015-08-31T21:34:55.562-04:002015-08-31T21:34:55.562-04:00Loved it. Poor girl. Funny twist, I smiled at the ...Loved it. Poor girl. Funny twist, I smiled at the ending. But in a cemeterey for God's sake??Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14087140585742801854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-18815574447789385992015-08-31T20:03:57.032-04:002015-08-31T20:03:57.032-04:00Excellent job! LOVED the ending. You rocked it, m...Excellent job! LOVED the ending. You rocked it, my friend. You teach through your FF. You, Denise and Michelle have taught me stuff and you don't even realize it. xoxoRobyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-41237246432016441442015-08-31T19:34:46.007-04:002015-08-31T19:34:46.007-04:00Hi L. G., sixteen is so young, but I think it fits...Hi L. G., sixteen is so young, but I think it fits today. Those kind of choice are always fraught with consequences!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-67980695438351556552015-08-31T19:33:27.068-04:002015-08-31T19:33:27.068-04:00Hi Graham, thanks!Hi Graham, thanks!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-70942023798092853082015-08-31T19:33:12.520-04:002015-08-31T19:33:12.520-04:00Hi Joy, so true, more often than not! Thanks!Hi Joy, so true, more often than not! Thanks!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-21742110673472181152015-08-31T19:32:46.471-04:002015-08-31T19:32:46.471-04:00Hi Madilyn, something tells me most of them are! :...Hi Madilyn, something tells me most of them are! :)Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-38023853147699645332015-08-31T19:32:14.095-04:002015-08-31T19:32:14.095-04:00Hi Barb, Hope you're feeling better. Thanks, l...Hi Barb, Hope you're feeling better. Thanks, love the challenge!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-4309915476699494202015-08-31T19:31:40.311-04:002015-08-31T19:31:40.311-04:00Hi Chrys, I thought it was something that happened...Hi Chrys, I thought it was something that happened everyday.:)<br />Glad you found it funny!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-35863559386897311742015-08-31T19:30:30.080-04:002015-08-31T19:30:30.080-04:00Loved your book, thanks Christine. I hoped folks w...Loved your book, thanks Christine. I hoped folks would find it funny!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-49179451360306999642015-08-31T19:29:59.890-04:002015-08-31T19:29:59.890-04:00Hi Alex, thanks!Hi Alex, thanks!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-91301582879513330462015-08-31T19:29:42.080-04:002015-08-31T19:29:42.080-04:00Hi Pat, nope not until judgement day!Hi Pat, nope not until judgement day!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.com