tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post2477598116668042303..comments2024-02-09T19:43:19.860-05:00Comments on DEFENDING THE PEN: LAKE VIEWYolanda Renéehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-82913536123636562762015-09-12T11:59:21.839-04:002015-09-12T11:59:21.839-04:00Such a thoughtful husband. :0 I hope he gets his...Such a thoughtful husband. :0 I hope he gets his.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-79299310828792313992015-09-11T17:50:29.920-04:002015-09-11T17:50:29.920-04:00Very sinister. I hope she comes back and haunts hi...Very sinister. I hope she comes back and haunts him when he 'visits'.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-6680330159557546852015-09-11T15:00:35.818-04:002015-09-11T15:00:35.818-04:00I don't know how you think of these stories.I don't know how you think of these stories.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14087140585742801854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-42876504771889281772015-09-11T12:09:42.042-04:002015-09-11T12:09:42.042-04:00Hateful, jealous man. May he trip getting out of ...Hateful, jealous man. May he trip getting out of his boat and slam his head against the cairn!Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-77346428364844346252015-09-11T11:08:16.317-04:002015-09-11T11:08:16.317-04:00Scary. Love it!Scary. Love it!Scheherazadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906467791904395295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-11266350168019183102015-09-11T09:15:06.454-04:002015-09-11T09:15:06.454-04:00Yikes! Such a beautiful photo and yet such an unne...Yikes! Such a beautiful photo and yet such an unnerving little story. Good job! :)Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-84966748630880556942015-09-11T09:11:14.877-04:002015-09-11T09:11:14.877-04:00He sounds a bit controlling. Not to mention a murd...He sounds a bit controlling. Not to mention a murderous psycho :-)dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-4807931212314876242015-09-11T05:49:33.398-04:002015-09-11T05:49:33.398-04:00Dear Yolanda Renee,
There's a husband who ta...Dear Yolanda Renee, <br /><br />There's a husband who takes control to the next level. Well done. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-70913918233607628512015-09-11T01:55:16.176-04:002015-09-11T01:55:16.176-04:00Nice take on the promptNice take on the promptDeepahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764125425140331692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-69964652851968248022015-09-10T23:12:47.970-04:002015-09-10T23:12:47.970-04:00Hey Denise, he is thoughtful isn't he? :)Hey Denise, he is thoughtful isn't he? :)Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-83609936972801201882015-09-10T23:12:14.478-04:002015-09-10T23:12:14.478-04:00Hi Penny, tell Gary hello too. Yes, a very sinking...Hi Penny, tell Gary hello too. Yes, a very sinking feeling here.<br />Thanks for the doggy kisses!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-3709801659110125232015-09-10T23:11:34.668-04:002015-09-10T23:11:34.668-04:00If only! Thanks brudberg.If only! Thanks brudberg.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-3196443691009139772015-09-10T23:11:14.662-04:002015-09-10T23:11:14.662-04:00Thanks Nick, it is isn't it.Thanks Nick, it is isn't it.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-81109905585319214882015-09-10T23:10:52.416-04:002015-09-10T23:10:52.416-04:00Hi Joy, I know what you mean.Hi Joy, I know what you mean.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-26532462499597986382015-09-10T22:06:15.721-04:002015-09-10T22:06:15.721-04:00Ooh, sinister as Nick said. Nice job, husband. Lov...Ooh, sinister as Nick said. Nice job, husband. Lovely of him to visit...:-(Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-71361099330653803102015-09-10T20:22:41.440-04:002015-09-10T20:22:41.440-04:00Hi human, Yolanda,
I got that sinking feeling wit...Hi human, Yolanda,<br /><br />I got that sinking feeling with your pawst! The very depths of "flash fiction" in this one.<br /><br />I'm getting ready for Howloween! Arf and owwwwww!!!!<br /><br />Pawsitive wishes and doggy kisses,<br /><br />Penny xxklahaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08613505424843475639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-84997332473152823742015-09-10T16:57:53.749-04:002015-09-10T16:57:53.749-04:00Ouch.. just maybe he slips and hit his head on on...Ouch.. just maybe he slips and hit his head on one of those rock.. Great story,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-19415162518421101582015-09-10T16:43:13.557-04:002015-09-10T16:43:13.557-04:00Nicely sinister! Great job.Nicely sinister! Great job.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-13832632380170712232015-09-10T15:03:53.658-04:002015-09-10T15:03:53.658-04:00How chilling! Great story Yolanda! I can only imag...How chilling! Great story Yolanda! I can only imagine how she must be feeling.Priceless Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08527831752045269161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-18230740326620321572015-09-10T13:24:25.344-04:002015-09-10T13:24:25.344-04:00That he might Pat, bad boy. I'm sure he'll...That he might Pat, bad boy. I'm sure he'll consider it a lucky day - to find she's still there!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-59806190719103039322015-09-10T13:23:15.784-04:002015-09-10T13:23:15.784-04:00Yes, exactly 100 words, I always try for the exact...Yes, exactly 100 words, I always try for the exact, don't always achieve it but always try. Thanks Madilyn, good to know.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-18172001220610813692015-09-10T13:12:25.134-04:002015-09-10T13:12:25.134-04:00I love reading your flash fiction! They're alw...I love reading your flash fiction! They're always a touch humorous :)<br />Also, is this exactly 100 words? Then that's a drabble! I dig writing them because it's hard getting exactly 100.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794648014067102242.post-48449507695374901242015-09-10T12:21:15.524-04:002015-09-10T12:21:15.524-04:00lol might hook her body one of these times and bri...lol might hook her body one of these times and bring her back upPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com